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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
You say you'd do anything for me. But what does anything entail? Would you climb the highest mountain? Wouuld you reach for the highest star? Would you walk a million k's? Would leap from the ledge over the sea and drown for me? Of course you wouldn't and i could never ask that of you. All i'm saying is be careful with your words. I know that you love me and i love you to. You don't have to show me the world. All you need do is say those three little words............. ...i love you. ~well i hope thats better then my last poem. this is my last post for a bit i'm takeing a break from trying to write anything cause nothing goods coming of it. I have to much going on at the moment. kate~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Katherine -- when a guy says those words, it means you're his everything. Don't be thinking that he means to do impossible things or at least close to impossible. great write hope you still stay to at least read and reply thanks for the share I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I don't know about you guys.....but if I loved a woman.....i'd do the impossible.....yea that's right.......I'd walk on 40foot stilts and scream in German/Latin at the same time while eating a whole watermelon.....you know it.... nice poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey katherine..this was a really sweet poem...And whadaya mean nothin good's comin out of it? Poetry is poetry, no matter how simple or complex or well worded or short or long or anything...so keep writing...doesn't matter if anyone sees it...but believe me..it does ya good... ~Carly "Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron) |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey Kat  sorry, my friend's name is Katherine and I always call her Kat, hope you dont mind! But neways...yeah I guess you could say when you write poetry its not going to make something magical happen and fix all your problems. it serves as more of a vent for your emotions, more then anything. but please dont leave, i KNOW it has to atleast make you smile a little bit to have all these peoeple telling you that you shouldnt leave Keep writing no mattter what *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Kate...Well you DO come from Canberra but I can't hold that against you forever can I?  On a more serious note, the unspoken bond in a relationship is, in my opinion, stronger than any three words someone could say. Good poem too. And Dopey, I am getting some weird images in my head now... ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cute. Take a breather for awhile if you aren't confident about your work. A lot is happening, yes, i can understand that. So take your time. You know where to find me, hon. I'm always willing to talk. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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