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Glint in Your Eye
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Glint in Your Eye |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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 I figured this one should be a serious one and not another one about rednecks, so here goes:~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It’s been almost 5 months Since I first looked into your eyes Things changed in an instant You suddenly became more Than just the friend That you’d always been In that moment I fell in love with you Even through the tears I thought I saw a glint Of love in yours as well Maybe I was full of hope Only tyme would tell After almost 5 months You still hold me tight So I’m guessing That glint was love That day you were many things You were my shoulder My hand to hold And when you took my hand You stole the heart That I wore on my sleeve That day our hearts became one Cause “Love is one soul, Dwelling in two beings”  ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~  www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Great poem Tamma! comgrats on 500 posts...i still climbing there. Regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was soooo good!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! i always like your work... keep it up!!! ~*Valerie*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Great at always Tamma. Congratulations! "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
congratulations on 500 Tamma “Love is one soul, Dwelling in two beings” beautiful lines I'm gald you 2 are going strong I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sweet poem tamma. Congrats on 500!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Congratulations!!! 500 is a very big achievement, you should be proud And you did it with such a good poem here too, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
WaHOOO!!! You know what? I LOVE the way you spell 'tyme'. So cute, old school. Heh wel anyways keep posting cuz your stuff is so peaceful and loving, makes me all smiley. Ciao!~Carly "Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron) |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Welcome to the 500 mark. I'm still ahead of you. ~_^ Try to catch up. As for the poem? Nice job. An excellent 500th post. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
library addition... |
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