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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Sometimes it seems as if you do like me By the way you smile and act But I don't know this for a fact I just wish that you could see I have liked you for so long even when I was with another we were like sister and brother so I hope I am not wrong Maybe one day we'll see and we'll se we should be together but right now our love's like a light feather I know we can make it, you and me |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was good!! makes me think back to a relationship i had like that... *sits back in the chair and sighs* okay but enuf about me *L*  good luck with all the rest of your poems. you are talented!!~*Valerie*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
WOW... nice poem. I cant relate but this was great! JR "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great way to express you longing for this one person. don't give up. keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. Good luck and hope you prevail.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you expressed this well, good job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love the scheme. It was original, and you did a great job of pulling it off. And the poem itself was quite beautiful. This poem interested me, so I'm putting it into my library. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Whoops... double post. I love it THIS much! ^_^ [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww this was really cute. i know someone like that keep posting!¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
This was really good! It was cute.. keep em coming! *Jennifer |
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