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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Memories of you flood my mind The way you used to light that spark in my soul the way you always made me feel special and then youd kiss me i never wanted to let go,of you and all we had it was like a fairy tale love story come true you were my prince charming and we were both happy.......for a while but then ou castle walls started to fall apart and the sun didn't shine quite as bright my heart begain to sink a little i loved you so much it hurt then you went away for a while i didnt want to.......but i let you leave so you rode of on your high horse and i waved good-bye with tears in my eyes you said you needed this "escape" and youd be back for me soon i waited patiently finally you returned but something was different your smile didnt hang the same as before something inside you changed eventualy you told me what happened about her and what you did to me you tore my heart to shreds this princess wasn't happily ever after anymore that was the day you left you haven't turned back since my crown is crooked and my heart is broken forever The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Beautiful poem. What a tragic story, though. Sometimes we would like everything to be a fairy tale, but it just doesn't turn out that way. Keep your head high, maybe your prince charming is still out there, waiting to be found. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
did you just return?..i remember you from when i used to bepost here in the first place.. well this is a really well written tragic story...a lot of talent great work! "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem!! too bad about the guy! don't you just hate them sometimes! I hope your ok. keep looking ~katherine~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I really hate it when I see people in passions hurting makes make me feel sad too  hun, things will get better one day you'll find your prince hold on to that fairy tale idea cause they do come true I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think that's the longest reply to a poem I've ever seen by Katherine......feel lucky. Anyway.....nice one here but sorry about the situation. Very sad.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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