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NeverSayDie
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0 posted 2001-02-01 10:44 PM



How does it feel
to be dropped flat.

To keep putting effort in
and getting nothing back

You think it would change
And not be so hard.

But no not a chance
It's not in the cards.

I sat and i studied
I gave it my best.

But that didn't show
by the scores on my tests.

But what was wrong
I don't understand.

I made major changes
I'd taken command.

But that didn't work
At least how i planned

But now here I sit
Down in studyhall land.

© Copyright 2001 NeverSayDie - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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State of Despair
1 posted 2001-02-01 10:47 PM


woah
that was great
you did awesome at this one, very clear in your thoughts
keep trying to conquer algebra!

-JDR

NeverSayDie
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2 posted 2001-02-01 10:49 PM


hehe i didn't really conquer it it conquered me but my life is better without it thanks
Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-02-01 10:51 PM


I thought this rocked!! I liked how study hall is a LAND.......an actual fantasy land. I like that. It's cool. Very nicely penned here.




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fractal007
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4 posted 2001-02-01 11:14 PM


Nice poem.  Your rhyming is Pretty cool.

As far as coping with algebra is concerned, here's how I did it:

I started to learn QBASIC, the computer language.  It's really quite a simple language.  All computer programming is basically like algebra.  JavaScript is the same way.  It's not too hard either, at least not the simple stuff.

luvnkris
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5 posted 2001-02-02 12:58 PM



ahh school! that made me think of it!!   hehe
i've been on summer holidays for the past couple of months and start again on monday!!
good poem! & i know how u feel about algebra, its just so confusing sumtimes!!
Luv Jo
xoxo


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MidnightMaverick
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6 posted 2001-02-02 07:53 AM


So you finally dropped her class eh? Welcome to the club! Freedom, aint it great? Keep up the good work.

-Maverick

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7 posted 2001-02-02 04:00 PM


hmmmmmmm......i love math
spcially algebra



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sweetstuff101
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8 posted 2001-02-02 05:43 PM


very cool poem!! That was kinda how I was last year!! But Algebra is REALLY easy....but ur poem rox!! Have fun in study hall land!!! *haha*

Luv Always,  
  ~*~SweetStuff~*~


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9 posted 2001-02-02 10:09 PM


Yuck. I hate math. Acire, you're a freak. Yuck. Can't reiterate it enough. Math is the devil's spawn.

xoxo
Jenn


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Dopey Dope
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10 posted 2001-02-03 02:27 PM


Somebody beat up acire



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

IsGona
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11 posted 2001-02-03 04:43 PM


*smacks acire with calculator*
You like math now!?!?!?!?  lol jk

Nice one NeverSayDie, I enjoyed it.
Doen with math... who needs it... lol

~Jason


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research

The early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese


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Lakewalker
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12 posted 2001-02-04 01:37 PM


Nice job on the poem!  Everyone needs math, but that doesn't mean you have to like it

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Spine Grinder
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13 posted 2001-02-04 02:58 PM


That's awesome!  Algebra is hard.
the day i tried to live
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14 posted 2001-02-04 03:04 PM


i once had a fellow tell me that he hated me because i never studied and alway managed to pass, so i suppose i dont identify with this all that well except when it comes to the math part since i absolutely despise mathematics and anything derived there of... i have this theory that newton was the spawn of satan... this was a well-written and entertaining poem... good job
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15 posted 2001-02-05 11:07 AM


Put it this way: I'm so horrible in math, that I JUST finshed my required credits. I'll be graduating in June, and you are only required to take math until 10th grade...after that its optional...

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