Teen Poetry #4 |
Do you still love me? |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Everyday it’s something new They don’t like us together I know we’re different But why do they lie about me? I didn’t cheat on you yesterday I never have and I never will What my lil brother said Was a mistake, it’s not true I don’t need a baby now It hurt when you said You didn’t know if You still loved me I told you to think about it To look deep inside To see if there was still love For the girl standing in front of you I still cried, cause it hurt They all tried to help But it wouldn’t work I got home and looked @ my Caller ID and saw your # I hurried up, and called right back You said you thought about it All I could say was “And” I cried when you said “I love you” All I could say back was “Thank you” I LOVE YOU TOO!!! I fought to keep us together I know you saw that Never once, have I given up On this, the best relationship I’ve been in Justin, I loved you then, I love you now, I always have, And I always will. ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
wow!Tamma, Justin is the luckiest guy to have you and vice versa. Im so happy foor you to. the poem was just beautifully amazing. Regina when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
hehehe ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was a sweet poem. I knew the situation beforehand and could expect a poem about it. Nicely done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I don't have any constructive criticizm right now all i want to say is im glad you and justin worked things out I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Maybe it's just me but... i think Tamma has a thing for this Justin guy. Did anyone else get that impression? ^_^ Good poem, Tamma, as usual. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
BACKROUND INFORMATION: Yesterday, Justin's cousin told him I walked out of the Cafeteria holding another guys hand, and there was rumor going around that I'm pregnant(which I'm certainly not).After everything that was said, he said he didnt kno if he still loved me. I told him he had to look deep inside to know if he still did...WHen I got home, I checked the Caller ID, and he'd called a few mins before, so I called him right back. He said he'd thought about it...and, as the poem states, I said "And?" then he said "I love you"..and all I could say back was "Thank you" ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well hey there i want you to just know that im here for ya tamma and i will always be there to talk to you know my email so if your feeling down use it and this poem is great i really liked it. i hope everything works out and i would just like to say: I LOVE THE NEW LOOK AT PASSIONS!!!! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Tamma embarks upon wondrous feelings as we arrive in a new look of passions... Ahhh, the sweetness of life. -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
is there some sort of conspiracy against my happiness lately? this is getting old...i mean, if ya see this, check out "One Helluva Week", as well. www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
Great poem!!!! ~katherine~ |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Wonderful poem Tamma!!!! I am so happy for you. "Amanda" What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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