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anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

0 posted 2001-01-31 12:01 PM

i can't really prepare you for this one..i just sat down and wrote without thinking of giving it any type of even beat or word count...it's all over the place

Stroke me with your godly fingers
(I'm so innocent and understanding
when i can't see the knife protruding out
of my back)
Feed me what you need to know
and teach me to cross myself
with a t,
disintigrating from naivety.

Scream for your savior
and don't complain if he tastes you
Scream for a haven
but don't run to me
when it call comes
crashing down..
I want to watch you
suffer on a sunday morning
when it comes bleeding
through your town.

Come flush us out, converting conservative
(we hide in the **** and live in the dirt)
I grew up choking on an umbilical cord
jammed down my throat...
but i can't digest faith
because i can see
what you really
want me to be

Woke up this morning with your words in my mouth,
your hands in my pockets, and your stench in my house.
Spread the word of the human swine,
Burn their odorous orthodox lives to the ground.

Scream for a matyr on sunday morning
i've developed a taste for death anyway
Scream for your god,
when he's bleeding in an
alley laughing at all the things
you've done...
and I wear this heroin smile because
he left you long ago,
when you were trapped
by your own unwillingness
to truly be alive.< !signature-->

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

[This message has been edited by anomaly187 (edited 01-31-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-31 12:41 PM

This was really great! Very powerful anomaly!! WOWOWOWOW!
I truly enjoyed this one here.
Wonderful job on it

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

2 posted 2001-01-31 04:09 PM

Good Job!!!

~Catherine

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-02-01 02:03 PM

I'm speechless
wow
totally speechless
your best poem so far
and one of the best ive read in passions
lovin it

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2001-02-01 03:02 PM

Anomaly, I'm left crying...these words hurt so much...Ok maybe its the meds, but yeah...amazing talent, so amazing, so beautiful...

"Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron)

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