untilted - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2001-01-30 11:58 PM

Searching in the eyes of the love you love,
You can find peace,happiness, and be set free like a dove,
Flowing beyond space and time,
Sitting down making a rhym,
Earth moves,
Mountains shake,
Baby cries,
Flowers bloom,
Stars shine,
Do i fit into all of this or will I be left behind,

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-31 12:02 PM

You fit in, believe me.
Nice one here jytree. Another wonderful poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

2 posted 2001-01-31 12:31 PM

great poem

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

3 posted 2001-01-31 12:36 PM

this is an excellent poem..
the rhymthe(hover it is spelled)
scene is really good and
the end really ends it beautifully..
great work!

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-01-31 12:38 PM

nice poem

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-31 05:09 PM

short but full of meaning
such questions we have when we are longing for someone or something
oh, the tragedy of it all
beautiful words jytree
beautiful sentiments

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-01-31 05:09 PM

short but full of meaning
such questions we have when we are longing for someone or something
oh, the tragedy of it all
beautiful words jytree
beautiful sentiments

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

7 posted 2001-01-31 11:21 PM

yes I will say I cannot spell worth a darn but it is the context that shares the the heart

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.