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Prisoner Of Love
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Prisoner Of Love |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
The physical prison is driving me insane I can't understand how to break free from all this agony Then she came to me, but she didn't stay long She came to the scene only to see the pain of a man To carve her initials into his soul and cause an internal bleeding of his heart This physical prison won't be up for long because this man is ready to break free To show that his soul will live on And that no women can keep him in her glass prison Only to steal his soul |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. I know how it feels to be in a cage, trapped. I liked this.....very good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey this is a great post..very meaningful words..and the end wraps it up nicely..great job "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is awesome!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very vivid imagery TruLuv! The emotions jump right through the screen in this piece, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's good to see that you have the strength to fight whatever unfortunate situation you are in. That makes us think and maybe in future bumps and bruises would have the same mind set as you do. thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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