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lilpoet
Member

since 2000-12-30

Posts 55
Dallas,Tx

0 posted 2001-01-29 05:51 PM

I love you
I want to spend the rest
Of my life with you
And through all this hurt and pain
The cold and the rain
We've mad a commitment
That we are one-it was meant
I could never love another guy
Our love is to strong to buy
We'll get through this
The time will go by in a whisp
And pretty soon
We'll be in each others arms
Looking at the midnight moon
This is love, we both know it's true
So hold on, soon I'll be able
To spend the rest of my life with you

*this is dedicated to my boyfriend and best friend Jeremiah Peters. His birthday is tomarrow too!!!*

~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

1 posted 2001-01-29 05:59 PM

Wow,
You are in love. Tell him Happy Birthday!!! Best wishes to the both of you!!!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-29 06:39 PM

Lucky you to have found the right man. Hope he likes his b-day.......make it special hehe.......nice poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-29 09:34 PM

very kind poem here
i enjoyed the words of sincerity
great job conveying your feelings
cant wait to read more

~JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

litle_krazy_poet
Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 71

4 posted 2001-01-29 10:30 PM

it shows in this poem that you realy love this guy jsut don't do any thing that will mess up what you two have, and tell that other guy happy birthday for me

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-30 06:40 PM

I hope I'm not too late in saying this, but I think that this poem would make a really great present for his birthday. Give it to him

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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