Teen Poetry #4 |
Dreams |
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
In a world of dreams reality is the only nightmare nightly screams daytime doesn't dare Darkness looms hatered blooms the evil has no end broken promises never to mend In a land filled with screams pain is always there the pain doesn't hurt as long as I continue to dream "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey this is kooly, i like (as usualy, i don't think there is a poem of yours i dislike cept for when u went all rap) so ur willin to come online to post, but not to talk to me, eh? :-( i see how it is... -berg- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this was good also. nice job. thanks for the read. I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i really liked this and i know how you feel(although it doesnt make anything better for you) this was an awesome poem im putting it in my library. one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
This is dark...REALLY dark. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here POA. I liked this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well done...i realte to this...hope to se more ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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