Teen Poetry #4 |
beware of mosh pits!!! |
punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok last weekend i was at a punkrock show and i broke my foot but i wasn't moshing. well not at the time i broke my foot. this just a poem about mosh pits. big guys. the music blaring. my adreniline pumping. ppl beating ppl. an elbow in the stomach. being punched in the face. OW! OW! OW! that's all i can say. my foot! my foot! we rush to the er. what's that blue bump on my foot? it's broken they say. hobble hobble that's me. they call me gimp. the one with the green cast on her leg. what a birthday day. 19 years old and already my bones are breaking. what an old geiser i am! oh well! things will happen. ok i know this one isn't very good but i'm bored and felt like writting bout my broken foot. robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha.. breaking a bone doesn't mean you're an old geiser. Gimp.. now that's just cruel! Bad memories, bad memories ANYways... very cute here. I enjoyed this. Mosh pits can be destructive! Thanks for sharing this. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i can't help it i love mosh pits! what happens happens. robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
They are dangerous....but if you like them then oh well.....can't stop u. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, *Never goes in mosh pits* peoples have needles and heard of the things they do with them. such as shooting differnt drugs into you. Cute poem though glad you didn't get hurt -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I love the mosh pits!!!!rock on!!! I love the music and the feeling of lots of people...lol....ummmm Regina ps great poem! feel better If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Love mosh pits and this was a great poem that I really enjoyed to read. Zu |
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