Teen Poetry #4 |
Ironic Poem |
the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
IRONIC POEM, Light breaks on this new day the things of yesterday have now gone away a new hope a future that holds it's own a future in which I will never be alone I see you awake there by my side your everything I dreamed of in you I confide it's wierd how I never thought I would find you and now your with me, I know I'll never be blue Your smile, your charm, your personality from the day I first met you attracted me maybe it was the craziness you first showed or maybe it's how your face just glowed My angel my everything now part of me I'll never let you down you just wait and see together we'll be come all we were ment to be "it's me and you and you and me no matter how they tossed the dice it had to be" So now I'm by your side till death do us part I'll love you forever more with all of my heart I will be the man that you always wanted as a child I'll be comforting, serving and at times hyper and wild These are the vows I make to you forever more though the future is vast I don't know what's in store But I know that with God, you and I as a team we can do anything if we try So in finality I love you and that's all I'll ever do this is ironic cause it's basically written to my wife, thing is I'm NOT married kinda a future present tense poem lol anyways there it is or was hope you injoyed I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, HAha I liked it! It's really sweet, I'm putting it into my library, its one of my fav. from you. Until your next masterpiece -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
thnx link, most people are gonna think that's crazy lol I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
jimmy never knew you thought that way bought me lol! i'm only kidding! it was sweet! gives me an idea! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
hey that's weird but sweet at the same time. liked it A LOT. keep on writin'. apsara |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
i liked it...rock on! *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
That was COOL!!! That's definately going in my library! Until your next! Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Well, even if you dont have someone to give it to now, whoever you give it too in 5 years will have the same reaction. TEARS!! Just carry some tissues in your pocket... *~*Amanda*~* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was absolutely beautiful. This is one of the best poems I've read from you. Whoever receives this should feel very lucky. Nicely done! --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
how sweet is this!! Wonderful job! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...i really liked how youe xpressed this...but it isnt ironic to me..cuz i write poems on bright sides of life...which i havent seen any..etc...you know?...anyways...bye [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done here. I liked this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
I think that's great. I know people that write letters to their future spouses and stuff. I think that's nifty, but I don't do it. I pray for him though. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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