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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Ah this thing called a crush twists you around and turns you to much you can talk yet on their words you hang then you feel stupid for the song you sang the one that basically stated your every feeling and now with humiliation your dealing those feelings I've felt for you for some time and I'm treated as though it's just a crime I ask you to call me but I get no answer your in my head like a tumor a cancer 24-7 your on my mind well maybe not that much let me rewind I value the things you do I love your personality maybe I'm just being stupid not using rationality I'm sorry I don't get nor understand you at all you say you love me then wont even call I try to call you but you tell me I better not is there something here that my mind forgot some little bit of info that I could heed would you help me in my time of need I don't understand so much about you but one thing I know is that my feelings are true it's wierd just to let you know your on my mind often no matter where I go. You'd rather chase some guy around from show to show while i'm here each day, yet you don't even know Sorry I'll shut my mouth now my words are in vain cause you'll run after another leaving me almost slain I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sniff, sniff* that was sad. You did a really great job on this one,I really felt your pain (not as much as you are, but you know what I mean). I hope things get better, and if they dont, just remember that girls can be so incredibly dense that it surprises even us. We don't do it often but when we do, everybody knows it. Good job! Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
if she's stupid then... why do you like her? sorry i had to ask that. I think relationships suck out loud, but its kinda wierd to say you love her and then call her stupid in your poem title. If a guy liked me, i'd be a tiny bit upset if he did that. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
it can go the other way around too....stupid boy!! i can totally relate to this...cept it was a guy obviously! haha good job on showing these emotions!  -ethel |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
your last 2 lines in this are fabulous, and the rest is great too! nice work! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hun is this for that one girl? cus i know it ain't for me (darn!) oh well talk to ya later. btw really good poem! robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really enjoyed this poem. I can relate to basically every word. I know how it feels.. sorry you had to go through this. I hope you feel better. Nicely done. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
GReat job here. I like this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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