Teen Poetry #4 |
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No need for a name |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
NO need for a name your not worthy to have that privilage you'll kill us all the same cause you lack a thing called courage No need for a name you thing your better than us all to you this is just a game where you're the one left standing tall No need for a name your actions speak louder than words ever did you seek self and fame you take us out to the auction then sell us for the lowest bid No need for a name you name your self every time you speak I think it's such a shame that you'll hurt others just to continue your winning streak No need for a name you'll forget us all the same no need for a name you're all about self fame I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is really good! I think it may be one of my favorites of yours it's going into my library. Your a wonderful poet I hope to have the honor to read more of your work. Until your next poem -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This one I really enjoyed. My favorite lines were: "I think it's such a shame that you'll hurt others just to continue your winning streak" That speaks so much truth.. it is a shame that people will stoop so low sometimes. Nice work. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is really cool...I think it could prolly be determined many different ways... keep 'em coming. Jenn "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
I liked this one...it was different but it was still excellent and what you said I applied to a few things in life...which is kinda sad...until next time.... ~Nikki~ [This message has been edited by Shygirl82 (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
dang babe you're such a good writer! robin ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done indeed. I am liking your recent stuff man. Keep it coming. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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