Are You My Father? (in response to Challenge)

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Teen Poetry #4

Are You My Father? (in response to Challenge)

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

0 posted 2001-06-15 08:09 PM

the girl looked up at the stranger,
hard to believe this man was not, her father.
she loved this man, but now, her innocence is gone.
her mother looked at her, worried.
she didn't say anything, but stood there,
staring at this facsimile of a father.

Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.
-Publilus Syrus

Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

1 posted 2001-06-15 08:30 PM

i like the poem a lot. what actually atracted to this poem is your title. and in my wonders of what this might be about i figure and i ask "is the poem about you trying to figure out the guy you were looking at and written this poem about the man you wanted to if was your father? the poem was awsome.