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Love Again |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
When you're out there on your own Where your memories can't find you Like a circle goes around You were lost until you found out What it all comes down to. One by one, the lonely dream has come day by day, they slowly fade away The look was in her eyes You never know what might be found there I saw her there, dancing right in kind Like the music that surrounded her Should I stay or go? I really want to know Would I lose or win If I try to love again? Right or wrong whats done is done it's only moments that you borrow but that song will linger on when the sun comes up tomorrow. May I have this dance? I'm going to try and love again... This Is Not Here |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Wow, your poems remind me of someone I know, but anyway, I really liked this a lot! The last two lines were really effective. Great work on this one! Keep it up!  ¤ ¢@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty nicely done here. I hope that the second time around works out fine for you. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I liked this one!!! gooodddddddddd jjjjjoooooobbbbb |
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