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Did the fairy princess forget her weeping willow?
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Did the fairy princess forget her weeping willow? |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
"Did the fairy princess forget her weeping willow?" I have almost pieced myself whole…but the one piece I am missing is you, the fairy princess that used to lie among my branches. Do you remember watching the dew drops form on the tips of my lushes leaves that surrounded your delicate bed? Do you remember swaying in the midnight air among my branches next to the silver pond? I remember the silver stone gazing down upon your porcelain face as you slept soundless in your bed of lushes leaves. I remember holding your ever so fragile body in my tender branches as the wind moved through your sparkling hair. Please tell me you haven’t forgotten the ol’ willow tree. For the day you do it shall be the death of me. One simple answer will decide my fate to be but why am I so scarred? Surely you remember all that has happened. Right? I mean, how could the fairy princess not remember her weeping willow? Is that even possible for there to be no recollection of me? I still remember the smallest details about your hands, wings, and the song you sang to make it rain. So how can there be a chance for you not to recall me, the ol’ willow? Tell me you remember. Remember me. The ol’ willow. Remember. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. By: Dana Samples 6-12-01 |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was really good. sad that it got so far down the list with not replies. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
nice so did the princess forget or remember the willlow tree. I really liked the metaphor used in this poem though it rocked. in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
this was really awesome. great imagery here  |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh hooray, another good one! Not much else I can say, but it was very good! Rhonda  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nicely done. I enjoyed this piece Dana.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice use of imagery...i liekd this one ...bye Dana  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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