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little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-06-12 01:13 AM

WHAT HAPPENS
AFTER THE FUN

WHAT HAPPENS
AFTER IT'S ALL DONE

WHEN THE PARTIES OVER
AND EVERYONE HAS GONE HOME

WHEN THE PARTIES OVER
AND I'M ALL ALONE

I STAND ALONE
IN MY ROOM

I STAND ALONE
I SEE MY DOOM

HE IS HERE
I MUST GO

HE IS HERE
MY FEAR I DO NOT SHOW

HE SAID
DON'T ASK HOW

HE SAID
IT'S ALL OVER NOW

I WROTE THIS AFETER WHAT I THINK MY LAST FIREND IN THE WORLD SAID THAT EVEN SHE DOESN'T UNDERSTAND ME. AFTER SHE SAID THIS SHE NEVER TALKED TO ME AGIAN THAT WAS LAST WEEK I SILL HAVE NO MORE FIRENDS

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-06-12 01:19 AM

Nice poem.

The caps made it strong. I liked it.
Sorry about your situation though. Things will get better! *Hugs*
Keep posting!

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-06-12 01:38 AM

great post!!!!!!...ditto to what jess said..the caps made it shout at the reader.
good work

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-12 02:04 AM

Well done here....I liked it. I'm sorry you lost a friend, but maybe you can work out your differences...good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

4 posted 2001-06-12 04:08 AM

I know how it feels to have no one understand you. Feel free to email me or IM me[I'm on AOL,MSN,ICQ] and I can give u a hand.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

5 posted 2001-06-12 08:52 AM

that was a good poem liked the format and such. I'm sorry about the situation though that stinks I had that happen to me.

The_rescue

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

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