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Nicholas
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since 2001-06-08
Posts 20
Washington , U.S

0 posted 2001-06-10 07:39 PM


Hi everybody this is something I wrote for my football team, it is for are linemen which I am the proud center for. So I hope you like it and leave a comment for me.


The Viking Line

We are Gold and Blue
We have pride and are brave
Hard hitting action is what we crave
We are the Viking Line

When the backs get hit
They say we don't do our jobs right
But they wouldn't last one second in the fight
We play hard and after the game to look so fine
But thats all right were the Viking Line

After the season we'll be the best of the best
But people will jest we didn't pass the test
We don't care were the Viking Line

Cause we don't care about the fame and Glory
Or being the headliners in the newspaper storys
Because we are the Viking Line


     -nicholas-  


© Copyright 2001 Nicholas - All Rights Reserved
chasing rain
Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737
Canada
1 posted 2001-06-10 10:00 PM


Although I'm not much of a football fan (FORGIVE ME!!! hehe) I thought this was a great tribute to your team! There are a few spelling errors that disrupted the flow of the poem, but other than that, it's a good piece! Hope to see more from you!  

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I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

Nicholas
Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20
Washington , U.S
2 posted 2001-06-10 11:04 PM


Sorry about some of those spelling errors I was in a hurry to get to the store with my mom and had to type fast.
Nicholas
Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20
Washington , U.S
3 posted 2001-06-10 11:05 PM


Sorry about some of those spelling errors I was in a hurry to get to the store with my mom and had to type fast.
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-06-11 01:35 AM


Offensive line is the heart of the team. Without a good line the backs can only do so much. The game is won in the trenches....
You expressed this well.....I'm quite the skinny one but I played Right Tackle 1yr and Right Guard 2yrs. I loved it to death until I became a Back....Yes I'm a traitor! haha...
Oh well......well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
5 posted 2001-06-11 09:41 PM


Hey, Nick!  Awesome, man.  I promise I'll join ya on the line in the fall.  I'll be the, bro!  It's all about the offensive line...  Anyway, glad to see you writing, and enjoying doing it.  Keep it up!

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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