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PiXiEpUnKeR Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49IL, USA |
I'm filled with RAGE sadness, envy, and hate I did this to you but my feelings and yours simply do not relate I hope it was worth it keeping it deep inside you you made me wait to hurt and now its all through What were you thinking? with her lips on yours? I'll just leave, don't worry no hurt anymore I just wish that you told me I'm your angel, your everything I dont want this brought up when we're reminiscing I love you baby I hate to cry I want to stay here I can't pass this by Just tell me you're sorry that you want to be with me our love will pass these obstacles please wait, we'll see |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww this is sad im here if you need to talk.....i hope things work out Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
I loved this one because it showed who you really are. It showed that you're not one to be messed with, but you forgive someone if they ask for it. It was nicely written, and showed definate emotion. Nice job!! "So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You are quite the strong person to view this in a mature manner. Just understand the difference between being stupid and forgiving. Some guys just don't deserve the chance, ya know? I know you'll make the right choice and I wish you the best of luck  Well done on the poem. Very raw and real. I could feel you just saying this out loud all sad like. I hope you get better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I think you need to listen to Dopey. This guy might just end up doing the same thing over and over. Don't forget the so called "GAME". I know it's hard, but find it in you to see the truth. Hnag in there hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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