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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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Howdy! This is one that I just wrote today. I've had one stanza of it in my head for a week or two, so I just got this down on paper. Anyway, once again, tell me what you think about it! Just to let you know, this one isn't about me, so I don't have as messed up of a love life as you all might think when reading all of my poems... lol  YOUR SONG I love you and I don't want you to go You'll always be in my heart That you need to know I'm singing to your song Though I don't know all the words I'm marching to your drum But I don't know how the rhythm goes I'm sure trying To help you understand When you start to walk astray I hold tighter to your hand I walk faster When you start to run I'll never leave your side I know you are the one I'm singing to your song And I'm learning all the words I'm marching to your drum And I'm learning how the rhythm goes - Cody - If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!! If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid? [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem...i enjoyed the read...bye Cody  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
at first I thought you were copying someone else, 'cause the first two lines are from a country song, hehe. Cool Poem  *thumbs up* *TiMMYBoY* |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww so sweet nice poem..and i like your name its cute. hehe Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
OOOoo I liked this one. Great work! Keep posting. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done! You expressed yourself pretty well here. Good luck with the woman situation man.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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