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Rapes the Mind
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Rapes the Mind |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Every thing that you let into your mind helps define what is called mankind to much violence and were detached from reality we find ourselves with the masses a casuality Porn and violence on the television and outside is there even a safe place to hide We rape the mind with our careless acts accept a lie and totally reject the facts Violence on tv has no affect on society it's just a means for the riches prosperity. How far can you go before your crossing the line that's if there even is still a line you cross the fence into peoples lives without care and then you rape their minds with things you share Half naked people I really don't want to see I don't want to hear your cursing it gets to me Will I take a stand for what I hold dear no doubt I'll stand and do it without a trace of fear So you will mock me because I disagree but someone has to stand for the fallen refere I won't let you enter my home and rape my mind but yet you continue to rape yourself and mankind Yes you have the freedom of speech but how far does that freedom reach Yes you have the freedom of expression but shouldn't there be some discretion Yes you have the freedom of the press but don't you realize this freedom is causing a mess So it's up to you will you continue to rape the childrens mind or will you take a step back, istead of going forward rewind in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
wow very powerful poem....its good that you will stand for what you believe in. the poem was awesome Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
at the risk of being cliche.... WOW.. jimmy that's great. an entity without boundaries or deffinition does indeed cease to exist. that's why anarchy is so stupid. keep on standing. if you want further evidence of a decayed society, i'll send you a copy of my paper on censorship in the arts sometime. remind me. yeah and I know what its like to be mocked for refusing to take part in what you consider is wrong. I am the only student at my college that refuses to paint/draw the nude figure. my professors hate me...  dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is very strong. That's extremely cool to stand for what you believe in. I don't agree with everything you said. I feel you shouldn't have to be censored unless you are going to endanger someone. Children don't need to be exposed to the things you mentioned-pornography,violence,vulgarity, etc. But as adults we should be able to distinguish our morals.Pornography and violence happens in real life, and if it's on TV or in music, we should be able to understand that TV and music isn't real, rather just expression. And as for vulgarity, what makes it vulgarity, a word is a word. What deems one worse than the other. I could make up a word and call it vulgar, but why is it. Sorry I rambled on and on, but I had to give my side. You have brought your point across in a way that isn't rude yet still very blunt. I have different views but still respect yours. I think you did an excellent job. Hope to see more like this soon. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...this is so awesome! Such powerful writing from you....  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Some deep thoughts here. I enjoyed them. Good poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I like your outlook in life. Very positive. keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
this was a really wonderful poem. you have a very good point that was presented in a very creative way. i loved it. keep it up:b love always- dana |
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Julian L. Chester Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 50 |
i like the poem and only if people really knew what u really mean when u wrote this poem but i hope they did cause i do and i understand where your coming from with this. keep writing. |
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