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my superman |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
Looking through this glass This glass that separates me from you Oh how I wish to hold you Just one time At night I cry the tears you can’t cry I pray to the God, up above Where you were sent from Asking to be your wings And make you strong Asking for one more day of life For a little boy I love with everything I have Praying that this storm will soon pass And this rain will surrender Leaving you here with me Full of life And no more suffering My superman Keep fighting And I’ll pray For you, That little boy, My superman, I only see through this glass That separates me from you And living from dying ok this happened awhile ago and its all better now  im still suffering from writers block so i hope this poem is ok  [This message has been edited by DarkAngelOfTheStars (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
that was really cool I liked it lots peace |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im so happy to hear that everything is better now Dont worry the writers block will eventually leave you and take its turn on one of us soon hehehe...good job! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yep!...writers block suks  ...but you'll be alright ...and this poem was nice...the written meaning was intertesing to me...bye kat  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it. Not as good as some of your others, but I did like this.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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