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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-06-05 11:37 PM

If I knew I could not have you,
I know that I would fall,
Without the sweetness of your voice,
I am nothing at all.

Without the softness of your touch,
I am rough as callused stone,
Without the brightness of your eyes,
I am dark and alone.

Without the melody of your laugh,
I am without tune,
Without the fire in your heart,
I am as cold as the lunar moon.

Without the comfort of your words,
I am terrified,
Without you my angel,
I am crucified.

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-05 11:43 PM

Amazing. This is so dif. from what you usually post. I liked this one a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-06 12:00 PM

i liked this poem greatly...awesome job...written very well...enjoyed...bye Adam

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

3 posted 2001-06-06 11:31 AM

wow that really rocked I like the flow and just the way you described everything it was awesome.

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-06 12:56 PM

I think we often rely too much on people to keep us alive and happy...Your poem expressed that wonderfully and even though it might not seem like this now...you can live without the person..it just takes a lil time and practice...kinda like getting on your first bicycle...at first its weird, awkward and unstable then after a while you get the hang of it and you can do whatever you want

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

5 posted 2001-06-06 12:59 PM

*never could learn to ride a bike* Anyway, it's not really about anyone. The thing just popped into my mind one day.

-Kosetsu

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

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