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An Untrue Friend
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An Untrue Friend |
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Aphrodite New Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 7 |
Hey..I wrote this poem about my so-called best friend..Krissy. I know some people may think it's wrong about how I feel but others might know how I feel. This is what I wrote. _-* An Untrue Friend *-_ My friend likes to hurt me She likes to see me cry When her three guy friends Make fun of me, she laughs She says she will stick up for me When they say them things But all she does is laugh and laugh Which isn't the right thing I stick up for her all he time But I don' get the credit back ever She can't hate me now.. We've been best friends forever Why does she do the things she does? And why is it that I'm always the one hated? I don't think I ever did anything to her Why am I mistreated? I wish she would just stop and think About what she does Instead of just standing there laughing And hurting my feelings This is what I call An 'Untrue Friend' |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I have one of those Untrue friends. Ironically enough, her name is Chrissy. Hehehe.... I'm sorry you're going through this.  Keep writing tho.xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
if you have an untrue friend just cast them out..either that or confront them head on..this is great poem expressing your thoughts on your friend..great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice one here. Hope all gets better in the end.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
There are many untrue people and we come across them periodically in our lives. I'm glad that you're recognizing the fact that you don't deserve this treatment. Stick up for yourself and maybe try to get her to think about it. Or else....move on. It'll turn out alright. Great poem! I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Aphrodite New Member
since 2001-01-05
Posts 7 |
Hey Ppl! Thanx for replying backto my poem.I really appreciate it. THANX! buh byez Luv ya*Z -x-Amber-x- |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
There is one way of determining whether one is a true friend or not that is "sharing" i hope she's not your friend only cause you're amusingto her talk to her about how you feel thanks for the share I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Nice poem. Up to the point that I entered High School (privite catholic school, blech) I had to deal with the same thing quite often. I could go into detail, but I wont, partly becuase I don't want to go on about it here and partly becuase class is about to end, but the fact is, it sucks. The best thing to do is tell them how you feel, and if they don't care, well, just leave them and find friends that care about you becuase they care. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I would know quite a bit about untrue friends! And believe me, I don't blame you for how you feel at all! I went through the whole bad friend thing last year. To make a long story short, she ended up ditching me, I had no clue why, I was totally crushed!! Then she started spreading lies about me...to this day I still have no clue what I did to her. But eventually her old best friend & I became best friends, and I have been alot better off since!! she was never my friend anyway, and it may have felt like a big loss but it wasn't. Well sry for rambling! ur poem was great! Keep up the great work, and keep postin!! Luv Always, ~*~S*W*E*E*T*S*T*U*F*F~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I TOTALLY understand where you're coming from on this....You really don't need a friend like that, because that is NOT a friend. My "friend" Christi and I have been having these same problems for about two years.....Good lucky. |
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