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Teen Poetry #4

Death Blooms

5_sweet_kisses
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 49

0 posted 2001-06-05 02:34 PM

Dark for fear of faliure,
An inner gloom as wide as an eye,
And fermenting roiling hate death grip in my veins
Unveling rancid petals flowering forth
Foul nekter the space between a blink and a tear...
Death blooms

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

1 posted 2001-06-05 02:55 PM

wow, dark, powerul. I like it. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-05 04:04 PM

wow..very dark...but so vivid......awesome!

SEA

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-05 04:51 PM

dark and powerful as all have said...great poem here

...hope tos ee more...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-05 11:02 PM

Great job! I liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2001-06-06 01:11 AM

hey somebody download the song Mudvayne-Death Blooms and tell me what you think...

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

6 posted 2001-06-06 10:55 AM

wow that was really interesting and really good. peace

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-06-06 01:01 PM

Excellent

Good job and keep em comin!

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