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Sharing my World
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Sharing my World |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
She laughs to much. What right has she to laugh At a world that can be so sad? She laughs to much. What right has she to be happy With a world that can be so twisted? She smiles to much. What right has she to smile In a world that can frown? She smiles to much. What right has she to grin In a world that can scow at her? She loves to much. What right has she to love With a world that can be so cold? She loves to much. What right has she to be kind In a world that can be so mean? They ask each other these questions While I laugh, smile, and love. Because my world is joyful, And my world smiles, And my world is full of love. I am just trying to share. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This one was kind of spur of the moment, and not one of my best. Please comment! *One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
spur of the moment aint so bad. I do it all the time. Good poem here. I really dig the message. to the library with it "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this a lot. Great job on it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you wrote this very well on this subject...i liked it a lot!...great job  ...bye Meaghan  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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