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Riding the Death of the World
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Riding the Death of the World |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
How would you- Like to Walk up beside me Whisper secrets, you confide in me All those things, you’ve shared with me Try and walk through this, dying land And wonder Will it ever be, lonely lousy Lonely lousy, just like me How would I Like to Crawl into a ball beside you And wait for it All to repeat How would I like To feel the beach, beneath my feet How would I like To see the world, crash down at my feet No I’m not angry; God knows I’ve no right to be I just want you to—crawl into a ball deep inside me Wait for it, all to repeat; ride the world- As it crashes, right at our feet, and whisper to me How you felt, nothing at all, no nothing at all. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great poem...fabulous  |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i love it, your becoming a fav poet of mine in this place... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job! I really liked this one. You write so well. You've always been a great poet to me. Keep posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I actually hate this poem...i want it to die. I liked it after i finished it...but, oh well. Thanks everybody...i'm gonna go back to my chronic self-entrenching now. Bye. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Not one of your best, it seemed really...confusing...in a bad way... I know where you're coming from though, I think you just chose the wrong form of transportation. ~First they tell you, you can’t sleep alone in a strange place, then they tell you, you can’t sleep with somebody else~ |
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