Teen Poetry #4 |
A Shining World |
zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
-this is a very short poem. Could maybe be a beginning of a longer, I dont know. Not my best, I don't even like it at all..but I'll post it.- Im in a shining world were everything is pink Im so high upstairs ..When will I fall down? |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked where you were getting at...but definitly i think you should finish this...hope tos ee how it turns out i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hopefully you won't |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
interesting choice of words to describe you situation. good job and keep sharing I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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