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Questions Posed by Souls
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Questions Posed by Souls |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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Questions Posed by Souls Who do you want? (Who do I want?) I don't know confheusion Jumbling emotions aksotean Is someone in there? Translate for me please drop i You can't t always run The light follows you You can't run (or (hide) Who are you running from away (Who do I want) (Who else is here) Can you see voices chattering chattering (Who does she want)(What should we do)(What about me) Silence The life for ME is... The one for me is... Life is... (Me)(Her)secret "The heart can think of no devotion |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
creative format...and the poem was nice...great job and thanks for the read...keep writing  ...?i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on the format! A most interesting read! I enjoyed this one a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Holy Cow! This is EXCELLENT!!! One of the best pieces I have ever read. It has had such an amazing affect over me. You rule!  ~AF~ Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*library* Know what you want. Become your real self. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
oh wow!! this poem is amazing! makes me think of e.e.Cummings...good job! me |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well done a very interesting format, a one for the library me thinks.  Zu |
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