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fozzyozzy
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0 posted 2001-05-27 09:50 PM


Questions Posed by Souls

Who do you want?
(Who do I want?)
I don't know         confheusion
Jumbling emotions     aksotean
Is someone in there?
Translate for me           please
drop        i
You can't  t
always run
The light follows you
You can't run (or (hide)
Who are you running from                away
(Who do I want)
(Who else is here)
Can you see
                                voices
                                chattering
                                chattering
(Who does she want)(What should we do)(What about me)
Silence
The life for ME is...
The one for me is...
Life is...
(Me)(Her)secret

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

© Copyright 2001 Sean Michael DeFlora - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-27 10:04 PM


creative format...and the poem was nice...great job and thanks for the read...keep writing ...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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2 posted 2001-05-28 01:05 AM


Well done on the format! A most interesting read! I enjoyed this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2001-05-28 03:06 AM


Holy Cow! This is EXCELLENT!!! One of the best pieces I have ever read. It has had such an amazing affect over me.

You rule!  

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-05-28 03:07 AM


*library*

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

pharon
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5 posted 2001-05-28 09:49 AM


oh wow!!  this poem is amazing!  makes me think of e.e.Cummings...good job!

       me

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6 posted 2001-05-28 10:36 AM


Well done a very interesting format, a one for the library me thinks.  
Zu

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