Teen Poetry #4 |
Missing You |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I just want you to know we miss you. I just want you to know we still care. I just want you to know the secrets, and that's we'll always be there. I just want you to know I'm sorry. I just want you to know we tried. I just want you to know you mattered, and that we sometimes lied. I just want you to know we're missing you, every minute of every day. I just want to know if you listen, to everything we have to say. I just want you to know we won't forget, I just want you to know we'll remember, I just want you to know we'll pray for you, and visit your grave in September. I just want you to know the orange carnations, were bought especially for you. And I learned more about you after your death, orange is my favorite color too. I just want you to know we're missing you, forever and another day, I just want you to know we love you, and that's all I have to say. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- For Jesica I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great poem Allysa. It spoke volumes about how you felt about her. Nice work. ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here allysa, I liked it. Sorry about your friend. My condolences, once again. Keep that head up. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
endearing sentiments Allysa i bet you she'ss crying and at the same time proud of you right now i love the repetitious style of the poem again, welcome back I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Allysa...she knows, I'm sure of it. Beautiful expressions. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very sweet im sure shes smiling above and tears are raining down this was so beautiful ~JDR "Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this is a beautiful way to let her know you love her..i'm kind of speachless so i'll just say keepin on doing what you're doing... "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this is a beautiful way to let her know you love her..i'm kind of speachless so i'll just say keepin on doing what you're doing... "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
this is a really really awesome poem. Losing people you care about & love is always hard....just keep ur head up! I just want you to know we're missing you, forever and another day, I just want you to know we love you, and that's all I have to say. I really like your poem, great job! Keep writing!! Much Luv, ~*~Sweetstuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thank you all very much!!!!! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Alyssa: Wow! Great poem. It was greatly expressed...I'm sorry about your friend. I'm sure she feels very happy about this poem and sad about the way your feeling at the same time. Keep writing! Hope things get better...=*) Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is such a beautiful tribute to your friend. I am shur she is looking down on you and im sorry she is not still with you. Beautiful poem |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks to everyone who read this. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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