I hope hes Worth it - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #4

I hope hes Worth it

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2001-01-24 11:21 PM

Love Me
Leave Me
You deceive me
Secret
Smile
My Denial
Again
Never
He’s Forever
Miss you
So much
Don’t keep in touch

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

1 posted 2001-01-25 12:26 PM

Wow.. for so few words in such short lines that is a very powerful poem. I really like it.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-25 01:33 PM

That sucks man. The poem is very sad but you expressed it very well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-25 06:30 PM

I totally agree with DragonFang
each word seems to summon so much emotions
feeds one to imagine the circumstances and events
great post Kevin

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.