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Teen Poetry #4

You Don't Know

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-24 06:26 PM

Howdy. This is one that has been sitting in my school binder forever, and I just dug it back out today when I had a little bit of extra time in English and finished it. It's a different style then I usually write it. It's not very good, but I figure I'd post it anyway.

Let me know how it sounds.

YOU DONT KNOW

Sometimes you don't know
Just how to feel
Is it love?
Is it real?

Sometimes you don't know
Just where to turn
Do you know?
Will you learn?

Sometimes you don't know
Just who you are
Will you ever know?
Shine with the stars?

Sometimes you don't know
Just how great life is
Do you see perfection?
The hope life gives?

- Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 06:42 PM

this was nice but the flow to be honest was iffy to me...other then that...great job and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-24-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-25 03:43 AM

Not your best Cory, but still a good read. I hope to read more from you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

3 posted 2001-05-25 06:19 AM

I liked the poem

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