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corey14
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-05-24 04:09 PM

most of my poems are about love
or about how much i miss the girl i love
its sad to think of her because i miss her
so im going to make a poem that isnt sad
and not about love....   it cant be done
          so here goes

          outside i see a dove
         who must be in love
         look now i see two
         with their young and new
         so as i said it couldn't be done
         so now i lay by my self in the sun

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

corey14
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-05-24 04:14 PM

please let me no what u think im just starting

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-24 04:18 PM

i liked the imagery...and i guess we will be seeing another "love poetry" marathon

...if u really jeffs little brother...haha...but hope things get better for u and this poem was quite beautiful ans sad...hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

corey14
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

3 posted 2001-05-24 04:51 PM

ya i am jeffs bro but all i can think about is a girl so it will be

live a little everyday and when its all over you will have lived a lot

love me and i will love u hate me and i will still like you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-24 05:07 PM

I liked this one, and who's jeff?
Do you mean our jeff? Our love poet jeff?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-05-24 06:52 PM

LOL Jeff...
Enuf said
I liked the poem
and dont worrie things will ok up
just keep smiling.

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

6 posted 2001-05-24 09:21 PM

ya jbaker515 the love poem boy is my bro

$ Jeff $ : )

"If I'm not back in 5 minutes......just wait longer!"

"You may take our lives, but you'll never take our FREEDOM!

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