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Knight. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Knight. We are unemployed, No dragons to slay, Were getting annoyed, But we don’t have a say, Diversification, They say it’s the key, But Procrastination, Sounds better to me, We’ve always made ends meet, We’ve always come through, But were left on the street, With nothing to do, We’ve tried to be cleaners, But it didn’t work out, We are just dreamers, We scream and we shout, We would go on the dole, But we’ve got castles to keep, We digging our hole, And we losing on sleep, Were going grey, Our middle age spread, We’ve seen our day, Our foes are all dead, We found our glory, In a trashy tabloid, Making a front page story, A fame we can’t avoid, The knights losing sight, Of values upheld, We’re cast into the night, The giants are felled, Of days of old, We had dreams to fufil, Knights, we were bold, We had dragons to kill. Another one of those... Zu |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Not bad really  I liked it.. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yep...another one of...  ...but hey i liked them...its your own style...very creative and interetsing...i truly enjoyed this read...marsha...graet job and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thanks Guys didn't expect response this quickly... anyway yep individual... that's what it is of course... Zu |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I like these kind of poems. You did very well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
another good 1 by Zu! ~IRIS i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You know this world is still full of damsels in distress  They still need the honor a knight shows great write keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
But Procrastination, Sounds better to me, WOOOO HOOOO!!!..now at least i can take comfort in knowing that there is one other person in this whole world that likes to prcrastinate!!..hahaha... great poem..i love the flow to it...kinda like the poem i would read out aloud over and over and over and over again to little kids.. ..another great poem from a great poet!!.... "Life is not long and boring, |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I wouldn't go that far cherish... anyway thanx for all the replies |
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