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How can I love you?
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How can I love you? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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How can I love you? When you're so far away. How can I miss you? We've never been together. How can I need you? When our lips never met. How can I feel you? When our fingertips are miles apart. These questions...fruitless. For no real answers exist. How can I love you? I just do. "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 05-22-2001).] |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
There doesn't neccesarily have to be an answer to the question "How can I love you?" and you expressed that well in this piece. It's cute.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, this is really great! |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
nice poem It was really sweet.. I liked it. Love don't need reasons..! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks guys! I'm glad you all liked this one...although I came up with it really fast, it means a great deal to me. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
the best thing about love is that there is really never an limitation you can make to prevent it. great pom, i liked it a lot, very swet Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
good job jenn! keep posting *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet...I'm sure J..i mean......i'm sure whoever this was about will LOVE THIS.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
whos j? dopey  ...anyways...i liked this poem...thanks for sharing it...and keep writing for the "ugly puppy looking guy"  ...haha  ...~mr.meanie  if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Guys!!!!! Sheeshh! Look what you started dopey!!!!??  Oh well, thanks for the replies!Oh, and by the way...he may be cute as a puppy, perhaps, but ugly...never! LOL [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
awwww.... I hope J get's in here soon, he is one lucky guy.  Seriously Jenn, I don't know what to say. You're a sweetheart. Jason ps LOL@Alberta Yes Jenn keep writting for the 'ugly puppy looking guy' 'Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN' ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Reeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy good |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks a lot Jay. Means so much.Thanks to everybody!!! Glad you liked it! |
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