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Passions Gallery: Dopey Dope (just beginning)
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Passions Gallery: Dopey Dope (just beginning) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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just beginning head spinning life worth living very bold broken mold new tales told giving, caring forward, daring gentle feelings bearing light lend happy friend to the end is debonair savior-faire only one word Javier  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awsome job sven, thats gotta be the cutest poem ive read today..short and simple...hehe *KiMMiE* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
great job **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was such a cute poem!! I liked it alot!! Hope Dopey sees it. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ohhhhhh yeaaaaaa!!!! Sven....yer too sweet...give us a kiss!  I enjoyed this poem....it was so..so...what's the word.....so ME....Yep yep....Thanks Sven...I really liked this. It really portrayed me in a good light....I'm not only fun and games, I am a person with real feelings...and this poem really helped others see that....well it helped ME see that,but hey I already knew that...so learn people...hehe But thanks Sven....too kind of you to even consider me a part of the Passions Gallery. Look forward to working on the next issue for the newsletter! *dances with joy*  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Yep, perfect description of our Javier. I really like this one, you captured his essence so very well with this wording and this form. Great work, thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
lonely*soul, glad that I could make your day!! Thanks!! DancinQueen, thank you!! vixengirl, I'm sure that he did. . . thank you! LoveBug, thanks for that. . . I really try hard to capture the poet in these pictures. . .and I'm glad that you could see him in this one. . . Dopey!! Now, about that kiss. . .  Just take it a little easy will ya?? LOLSeriously, I'm glad that I could show you to yourself in such a great way. . .I'm sure that there are others that feel the same way. . .but, for you to realize that this is how you are, gives these poems a whole new dimension that I never really thought of. . . thanks for that insight. . .and I'm glad that you enjoyed this. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful as always...just wonderful...i loved this poem...cause this really showed...the real javi that i know...you have wrote it so well...i enjoyed this whole poem...sven ...thanks for sharing it...and until next time... if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
HAHAHA! THIS IS SO COOL! I love it, very well done, Sven!  ,Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh Sven, this was very nice. I personally always thought of Dopey as a giant mud cake...ahem...No I didn't...  lolAlright, now seriously, it's a very nice tribute to the Dopester. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Heh this was awesome! Really cool portrayal of our good buddy Javiwavi. Loved it loved it.  ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i really love the passions gallery pieces, you do such an incredible job of capturing the essence of the people you are writing about. you did an excellent job once again. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was very awesoem.....It showed javier..... Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ok, Dopey is kissing other guys now  Sven --- you are one of a kind. You're the only one who dedicated enlightening poems to people in passions. I thank you for mine, and it seems like Javier thanks you for his "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
albert, thank you my friend. . . I'm glad that you could see him in this. . . Suga, thanks!!! and thanks for reading. . . AF, thank you. . . your comment made me laugh. . . CarlyWarly, so glad that you enjoyed this poem for JaviWavi. . .  thanks!!banburycross, thank you. . . it's nice to know that you can see the poets in these words. . . Ina, so glad that you could see him in this one. . . acire, it was only a little peck!!!  And I'm glad that all of you are enjoying these. . . believe me, I enjoy doing them!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Still.......Thank You "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Sven, you are awesome! You did Javier very well, I was wondering where you were going in this poem. The rhyme at the end took me off guard, I loved it! Wacky!  Awesome work as always. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aweomse description of Javi! Another one going in my library. Wow.. I am loving this series. You ROCK, Sven! --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that's great!! I like the last stanza best... Bel |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow..i cant believe i missed this one of yours k!!!!!!!....as usual this is so sweet of you...i love your poetry buddy...you rule!!!!!!!!!!!!!..agpfagp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey this is awesome, and i think it describes dopey well! good work sven. later all -fear- |
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