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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
life death it's over in a berth who cares not me not even when i pee i sit in my room wondering what's my doom i walk through school thinking why i'm a fool pathetic thats me but this my last plea and if you couldn't tell i'm depressed somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this shows a really good use of short phrases to convey your feelings...but why did you post the poem twice?..anyway this was a great poem so keep it up. "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i didn't mean to if a moniter reads this delate the one called life thanks somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice short one. I hope all gets well soon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
In my opinion, what goes up, must come down. (well, it's probably really Newton's law or something) However, I believe the opposite is true as well. You'll get through it. Good luck, and nice work. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's a good step to admitt how you're feeling maybe you need to talk to an adult about this see what they can do for you we all have ups and downs in our lives just stay strong and things will get better I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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