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MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-18 10:59 PM

She's my Nightbird
flying through my dreams
I wish I could keep her all for me
But tomorrow I have to set her free

All these tears I shed
I must dry when the sun leaves his bed
Cage my Nightbird for me to show
Until I realize she doesn't love me so
Fly on Nightbird

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

1 posted 2001-05-18 11:20 PM

...wow...

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2001-05-18 11:41 PM

ewok i love this. goin to my library for sures. dude i cant believe u say ur poems sux cuz every single one ive read ive loved!!
this one is just amazing. i love the concept.
great job best friend best friend! *hugs*
i love you

'tiif'

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2001-05-18 11:41 PM

*clicks on da lil button down theres*

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-05-19 10:52 AM

interesting, i like this a lot. very cool image and i like the way you ended this piece. keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-19 04:10 PM

I felt that it ending too quickly. I thought you could have added a bit more before the ending. Anyhow it was still a good read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-21 02:30 AM

this was a nice poem...images were great...thanks for the read and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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