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*InvisibleTears*
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 2

0 posted 2001-05-18 11:55 AM

I'm tired of swallowing your stories
Of getting fat on the lies you tell

I'm tired of feeling sorry for you
Even when you are not the victim in it all

I'm tired of your excuses not to talk to me
The way you say you care, and then ignore me

I'm tired of you saying we need to talk
And then only lecturing me when I'm ready to open up

I'm tired of crying myself to sleep every night
Of hearing my sobs echo through a silent house

I'm tired of keeping it all bottled up inside
Because I have no one to talk to

I'm tired of being all alone
Even when I am surrounded by "friends"

I'm lost in a nightmare

I'm sick of searching in the dark

I'm tired of it all

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-18 12:36 PM

first of all welCOME TO PASSions...as this was an truly great first post...cuz i related to the whole thing...i saw my lifes situations in there..well some

...anyways...thanks for shaing and hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-18 12:49 PM

Welcome!

Please check your email for a special greeting!

SEA

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-05-18 02:21 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Great to see you join us here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy reading and sharing as well. Your first poem is very emotional. You will do good in here. Hope to see more of your work in the future.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-05-18 05:35 PM

Welcome to Passions!!

great first post, i really liked the way you seperated the lines at the end to create a more powerful effect with them. i look forward to reading more of your work, i hope you stick around and keep posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-19 03:28 PM

Welcome to Passions!
This poem rocked and i hope to see you post mof often and reply aswell!
Bye!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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