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Why Do I Try?
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Why Do I Try? |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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Why do i try to work things out? You only hurt me. You never try so why should i? I say i'm leaving but i only come back. you say you love me but yet you turn your back. I say i hate you but why am i kissing you. You say you're sorry. Then why is she here? You say you wanna get married. Yet we are apart. Why do i try to work things out? Why do i try. Some one please tell me. For now my love we are through. You go your way i will go mine. You see my dear i am tired. Tired of trying to work things out. I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i know this feeling, you did a great job expressing a dificult situation through your words. i hope things get better for you, keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem you managed to express yourself very well keep on sharing  Marshal Zu. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
heh robin you rock hun keep it up ok amazing poem i know wut ya mean later love ya hun ben i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
awwwww tks you guys ! robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you did so well in expressing this...such a hard situation...hope things work out the best for you...and always keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This really is a tough situation but sometimes you have to try and stop fixing things and start doing things for yourself..come to think of it i should really take my own advice lol N e way im proud of what you did..you did whats best for you and in the end, your the only one who is gonna matter. You did the right thing in my opinion... |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great poem. Just never give up, because eventually you will work things out, or things will work themselves out. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
People say never to give up...and to keep going....but there is a fine line between trying to make things work and being quite stupid. I, for a time, was very stupid....in fact some people would say I'm stupid right now, but regardless of anything you gotta fight for the love until you cannot fight any longer...Well done on the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i dont think your 'stupis' javier  hey robin  great job on this poem. i think you expressed yourself very well on this. hope all is well with you! and hollaw at me on yim okays...u got me all curious now cuz u wont tell ben :P newayz great job! and cant wait to cs mores!o and btw thanx for not gankin me Squirt..... ...agains! lols :P tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me I want to hear you say "Well done" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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