Teen Poetry #4 |
What it feels like to be Old |
MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
What does it feel like to be Old? Having parts of your body give out one by one, to be reverted back to a child who can barely chew its food or walk. To have a sharp mind but have a withered body To have tainted mind and sound body To have to be stuck in an awful existance To be Old. What can we do to prevent this unseemingly inhumane end to creep toward us with a crooked drooling smile and leathery wrinkled fingers? Why? Why can't we prevent this?!? Do we have to watch loved ones wither away and becaome nothing and die? I can't. I won't. It MUST be prevented. I will never be old. ~Dedicated to my grandmother who suffered a massive stroke and now is paralyzed on the left side.~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. very sad that we all have to go through this slow, painful deterioration of the body before we all die. BLah to that. Nice poem. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Do you know what I think old is? Not the deterioration of a body but more losing the ability to laugh at life and yourself. When you lose that, you grow old instantly. You can talk to 80 year old women who can barely walk and you can ask them if they feel old. The best reponse I ever recieved was "My body may be falling apart and I may not be able to walk properly but as long as my mind keeps feeding me memories of my happiest years, I will always be young." I think that sums it up perfectly, however I am sorry to hear that about your Grandmother. ~AF~< !signature--> "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha [This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I do believe that being old is all in the mind. I guess when time has passed as so many times, our outlook in life and our priorities in life changes with it too. I do see a lot of older folks having fun Driving around together Maybe, it really isn't that bad Great post though great topic to bring up keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
well i like the poem i don't really wnat t ba a baby but if i coud stay the age that i amk now (15) that would be cool. and i'm sorry about your gradmother m ine is in the hospitle right now and that don't know what is rong hope thing get better somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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