Teen Poetry #4 |
A dreamer's dream |
jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Romancing the stars, kissing the sky, Never settling down, no more goodbyes, For I flow beyond the edge of time and space, Waiting for the call before I take my place, Laying in a field of endless dreams, Where nothing or no one is as they seem, Running into the arms of the one I love, Uniting with her as we become as a dove, With love on my lips, And a endless goodbye, I gather my strength and take to the skies, Fly fast, Fly free, Never any want, Never any need, Taking my place among the stars, For I am the moon giving light, I am the one you pray to when you ask for might, I am the one when you ennd a friend, And I am the one that will stick with you until the end, I am a dreamer yes indeed, I am one that the sons has set free, one more glance at the stars, Before I wake and recive my daily scars. Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I'm back Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
nice piece of work. I like how it flows. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Midnight Maverick |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks mavrick it is good to know I can still write where people still like them Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was a nice one jytree. I liked it very much. My fav from you so far!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
HEY Good to hear from you my friend I am glad you like it because I will probually never write one like it again maybe! Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hello there! Welcome back. I really liked the poem, it had some really good word choices. So beautiful, so beautiful.... ~Carly |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
very nice! Tres Bien! (sorry I been taking French!) well ur poem was awesome, I really like it! It flows well! Keep up the great work! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
probably the best poem I've read today wow, i don't know how i missed this one thanks to sweetstuff, she brought it back up this is beautiful thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
GREAT poem. I like it. Its about time you start posting again, mister! LyL, Malinda |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks everyone yes I am gald I can still write after I looooooooooooooong vacation.. Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
WOW that was really good!!! It flowed well and it was really sweet!!! Keep writing!!! I will be looking for more of ur poetry!!! ~LOVE~ *~*S*T*E*P*H*A*N*I*E*~* *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
All i can say is WOW! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an AMAZING poem!!!! Keep it up! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks everyone i would of never imanged it to do so well Lead me not into temptation, I can find the way there mysel |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
I loved your poem... WOW your really good at explaining your thoughts and emotions... I wish my dreams are like that every night...If you ever wanna talk E-mail me at [email protected] quote: Kim Rayann |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Great poem I got see the journey of flight Hope to see much more [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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