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My Prayer |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT 
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Every night on my pillow I lay, I stare up to Heaven and silently pray. Praying to God that things will improve, and that He'll give me the strength that I need to move. That tomorrow will be a brand new day, that my problems will disappear and it will all be okay. Maybe He'll give me the motivation I need, to conquer my fears and go on to succeed. I open my eyes and gaze up above, "Please God give me my own special love." This pain in my heart must be here to stay, because every night I still have to pray. Does He hear my cries, Does He know I exist? Obviously not, Cuz the pain still persists. I need answers to guide me, Need some help to set me free. SO God if you hear me, Is it too late? I'm beginning to think that this misery is my fate. I need to escape or I'll fade away, because I'm not sure if I can last one more day. This is my last attempt: So God...if you're there, Please...answer my prayer. ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hey..this poem was my life in that perspective..i totally enjoyed and related to this poem i have written a poem on the same topic...tahnks for sharing so i had some sad but reall memories of my lost prayers...keep writing   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow nik that was soooo great!!! i havent read that one!! awsome job i luv ya! *KiMMiE* |
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dramaqueen22086 Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 50Hadlyme, CT |
yeah nikki thats really good, i loved it. i haven't seen that one... is it new, well i just wanted to say i thought i was great. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is really powerful..... very emotional, it put me in quite a compassionate mood. Such powerful feelings of helplessness.... I really really enjoy this poem. I'd like to give you some advice, but maybe it would be best to keep it outside of the forum? Perhaps I'll talk to you later... ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wait..allan...is it cause its religion related?..tell me...that aint right? ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Hey guys thank you for the replies!! I really appreciate it!  Allan, if you would like you can talk to me on AIM my sn is nikkigrl2004. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This pice is very heartfelt and beautifully written, i like it a lot. you really captured a feeling of hoplessness and desperation in your words. great job, keep posting your poetry. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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ScarletPoetess Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 18 |
This is a very good poem. It's good to put things like this is God's hand. Sometimes, He's the only one that can help. You expressed your emotions tremendously well. I can't wait to read more. Scarlet |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Thanks, glad you liked it! ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really good. I'm very impressed with this one. Don't lose hope though. have strong faith and you shall be rewarded. Keep praying "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent job of expressing your feelings in this poem! I hope things can work out for you "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really felt you did exceptional on this one. I have asked God for a few things, but only when I'm really messed up. I hope all is well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hey library..oops |
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