Teen Poetry #4 |
Michael-I Love You |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
For the past 5 months, You’ve always been there for me. I knew I could count on you, To listen and help me out. Michael, you’ve been great And I thank you for that. Thank you for wiping away my tears, And giving me those healing kisses of yours. You’ve proven time and time again, What you hold in your heart. You are so great to me, And I hope that’ll always be. I love you, Michael!!! www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
What happened to Justin?? xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
hehe...Jenn...this is a lil bit of a long story ill wait till i have a few more replies to expalin www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i was gonna sk the same question What happened to Justin? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
what happened to Justin?! Regina btw good poem |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Michael is obviously her baby brother or a friend of hers or something.........Justin couldn't have gone out that easily without countless depressing poems by tamma. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahhh, Dopey, that is what I was thinking.... but you never know. Tamma, explain now?? xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
It's nice to have someone I'm glad you do Hope Michael helps you through the unthinkable times and the wonderful ones too Best of luck to the both of you and I think everyone wants an explanation...I guess I too am curious. Do tell. ~*~Jessica~*~ *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
lol im w/ everyone else..what happened to justin?? ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Ahhh...What Happened to Justin? Nothing happened to Justin...He's the greatest guy to walk into my life...but nobody has guessed right yet...Keep goin' ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Michael could be a relative, or a friend... Or come to think of it... Michael could be a pet? Or even a metaphor...? Tough to say... Michael could be anything... Thanks for another mystery, Tamma... but my guess is Michael is your dog. Oh... the Five Months thing has to be a hint... it just HAS to be... |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Hehehehe.... < !signature-->Allan..."Michael" is a human...and you're right, the 5 months is supposed to be a clue...and "Michael" isn't his first name. I love him very much, and I'm being honest when I say that nothing has happened, Justin and I are still goin' good. I'm just having fun with this lil puzzle! ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well I think you gave it away. Michael is Justin's middle name. Nice poem tamma. ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
In the words of Homer Simpson D'OH Guess my clues were a lil too obvious [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
How I hate mysteries. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i agree. misteries suck. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm glad I read this kinda late, I didn't have a clue who Michael was until you said that it wasn't a first name. I figured it out then. Nice job on the poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You suck... ! It took you like forever and a day to tell us about Micheal... however you definitly gave it away w/ the middle name thing. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ < !signature--> www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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JoltPunk New Member
since 2001-01-23
Posts 4 |
Wow, I like the way you can incorperate a hidden meaning into the poem. It is very well written too. I havent read any of the ones about "Justin" but I think Im going to go look them up. If they are as good as this one, they should be great! |
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