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October 13th (Allen's Challenge)
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October 13th (Allen's Challenge) |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Note: Best I could come up with in like my 5 mins between classes My Bithday Friday the 13th "Why not name this boy Jason" Everyone beware!! That's right!! I was born on Friday the 13th and my parrents named me Jason!!! Go figure.  "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
LOL What an interesting story! Glad you could express it! You fit this well in the Senryu format!  Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I like this one, liked your sarcasm! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... great work Jason, I really enjoyed this, challenge well met!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*hears creepy music and runs*  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow, how eerie. Nice one... lmao ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Nowww this doesn't fit! You on Friday the 13th?? Hmm.... I'm not superstitious anymore....Much luv ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one's creepy in a funny sort of way, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
That was a great job there... congratulations Jason... keep up the great work!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
ROFL! I love this one....it's hilarious! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
now that is what i call FUNNY i ain't laughin at ya aight i just love the way you make fun of that event in your life nice to see people not sweating things that don't need to be sweat on great job ~*runs with Dopes*~ I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You ARE a freak... lol j/k Let's not go around killing anyone okay? This was funny.... xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you everyone for replying. A FREAK I am. A doll for a toy A girl would bring us all joy DOH!! Another boy HEHE I was the 3rd of 4 boys... My poor parrents! *Throws axe through Dopeys back* NO NO NO... JUST KIDDING "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
i was 11th of well 11 boys so NYAH. oh anyways great work man, how about a hockey mask for your birthday? >¶Øʆ< |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Jason, was your birth the unlucky thing that happened to your parents?....just joking around.... i liked the unique way you penned this one...makes a refreshing read  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Dude you are evil! haha I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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