Teen Poetry #4 |
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A Friend to be Found |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA ![]() |
Yes, folks, ANOTHER one about my ex... I wrote these all a while ago-- this is simply the next one of all I didn't post before... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~ There’s so much I want to say That I can only hide… So many secrets I would reveal If you were by my side. But I will simply write them here, Keep them under lock and key, Never to unveil them- Not for anybody. First I want to know why… Why’d you go away? Were you being honest That dark and lonely day? If you were honest with me, That means you still care. You just missed your friends And so to let me go you dared. I’ve been missing you For what seems so very long. No matter how hard I try, I sometimes fail to be strong. I know it could have worked. You didn’t want to try. You didn’t see a solution… So I bowed my head to cry. “I guess the idea of having a girlfriend was better than actually having one.” These words echo through my mind And burn like the flames of the sun. I want it to be all over now, I just want to move on! The darkness needs to end And give birth to the dawn. I want to stop being your ex And start being your friend. But before we’ll be able to talk The awkwardness must first end. So now I say goodbye To the boy I cared for so. I’m turning around now, And away I will go. When a long time has passed, I will turn back around, And walk back to you: A friend to be found. "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is wonderful....it touches the heart ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a very good poem written from your thoughts... i liked it...and hope things get better keep writing ![]() ![]() if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-30-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice job on this poem, I enjoyed it. Well done. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done....Enjoyed it a lot. Hope things improve! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
![]() I think everyone's been there. Nice poem.. you portrayed your emotions very well. I enjoyed this a lot, and I hope the situation improves. ![]() --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
wicked, it's not just a maine thing,, Humm……..chocolate,,, that is my thing |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sara, this is another lovely poem I don't understand why you don't like them Written down emotions are always beautiful in my book keep sharing and I'll surely be reading ![]() "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I agree with acire, you express yourself beautifully and use your emotions so well in your writing. this is definetely a piece that a lot of people can relate to, you did an excellent job on this. keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
This poem good! ![]() ![]() |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow..i liked this one alot.. break up stings..and even though u wrote it a while ago..youll always have it in the back of your mind..ya know??? anyways..its the guys loss *KiM* |
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