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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
again i am alone again i know you left me again you make me feel like nothing i wonder why you do this to me i never asked to feel this pain why do your words torture me i feel my love pouring out like rain again you have left me alone again i want to die again i weep for my loss i cant believe this is happened to me i kneel down and weep why do you torture me do you really think i am a creep again i hide in the corner again i fade into darkness again i fall away from this world i wonder if you know you do this to me i want you to know you how you make me feel why cant you just be in love with me why cant you know the love i have for you is real again i weep upon the floor again i scream out into the night again i wonder why, just why i feel alone i feel scared i feel blank i feel dead again i weep for the lost love of you i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it [This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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takemeawaytoday Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 13Missouri |
Ben you'll never be alone and if you think about it someone may leave you but you have one person up in heaven that never will..jen Oh yeah I loverd the poem |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Tough man... really tough. Sorry that you have to be feeling this way. Well you'll pull through, all wounds heal. The poem itself was not too bad either. Nice job.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs* i love you “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ben, you write about all this pain, but tiff seems to be loving you just fine. Some stuff going on? I'm confooozed.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very sad poem, Ben. It seems like times right now are very trying.. I'm sorry. But keep writing, that helps.. and know that you can talk to anyone here at Passions. That's what we're here for. I really hope things get better. *hugs*  I liked the poem. It's very well written.. Nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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takemeawaytoday Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 13Missouri |
good poem. pretty sad though. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad but nicely written ...thanks for the read..i enjoyed it...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have to be strong my friend That's all I have to say PIP is always gonna be here for ya "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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