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Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

0 posted 2001-01-21 01:36 AM

miles and miles apart
i smile despite all my tears
still we share the sky

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-01-21 01:39 AM

"love is in the air"
na na na na...
another sweeeeeeeeet senryu... she'll melt melt melt...
loved it!

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

The Lost Supertone
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 74
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

2 posted 2001-01-21 01:40 AM

Such a hopeless romantic... wait... are you? HOW COME I WASN"T INFORMED?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-01-21 02:23 AM

This was a nice one allan.

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I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

4 posted 2001-01-21 02:26 AM

Wow been a while since I been to this place... only got time to read a few... this was great. I too love the idea that no matter how far away someone is we can look up at the same sun or same moon, unless of course he/she is on another planet... Then that would be different.

Good one
~Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

5 posted 2001-01-21 10:22 AM

Allan, I just had to laugh at this for personal reasons.*smiling Wonderful senryu
you give the reader the true meaning of all this very well. It has truly touched my heart keep posting and.....keep writting from your heart. ~Angel in Flight~

look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-01-21 03:53 PM

This was very pretty Allan.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-01-22 05:32 PM

Yup, fantastic job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-01-23 05:38 PM

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm giving you a standing ovation on this one
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

9 posted 2001-01-23 05:56 PM

it was amazing. you know i adore your stuff.
she's a special girl.
regina

StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

10 posted 2001-01-23 06:02 PM

BEAUTIFUL!! Such deep sentiments here. Much enjoyed this one. Probably one of the best senryus I've ever seen. Thanks for sharing. ~*~Jessica~*~

*the expected escape is only a portal to true devine Hell...leave that door alone*

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